gotta agree and echo what jord has said,

upon seeing the orignal page - the intro, I was pretty amazed, if this page
is amazing, then I guess the main page
should be awesome right ?

just like your meal at a restaurant.....

I was really disappointed in the page layout, and the buttons, those buttons
just don't go with your design,

I would redo that whole page, from the little chocolate icecream logo and
below......

that vertical chrome bar - I would get rid of it, it sticks out like a sore
thumb, and doesn't add anything to the page,
it's actually distracting, it's the first thing my eye hits upon.

Everybody is going to tell you something different, - remember that it's
art, what somebody considers beautiful, somebody else will
not like, but you asked for opinions, and so now you have some to start
with.

get rid of that gray background, it's dreary, and depressing. You have some
of your links in "blue"... and the text is huge !,
that's a "no-no"..... you'll see that on many many amateur sites, don't
oversize your text like that, it just doesn't look professional.

Think of your space as prime realestate, you want to use it very
effeciently.

Mark.



----- Original Message -----
From: "Jordan L. Chilcott (Dreamweaver List Admin)"
<dreamweaver-admin@blueworld.com>
To: "Dreamweaver Talk" <dreamweaver@blueworld.com>
Sent: Saturday, May 18, 2002 9:00 AM
Subject: Re: Site Critique - DigitalTreats


> Peter,
>
> Please forgive me when I say that your web site doesn't do your work
justice
> at all. I looked at your 3D creations and I was just floored by them (I
want
> some of your secrets!! :-) ). I loved your realism in your objects. When I
> looked at the rest of the web site, I thought that it didn't match your
work
> at all. For some reason, it looked look like it was just slapped together
> for the sake of creating an online presence. Your objects have purpose. So
> should your website.
>
> Forgive me if this looks like a harsh read, but if I'm seeing this, I am
> wondering what others are seeing.
>
> I also found some javascripts breaking under IE5.1.4 (Mac OS X). You may
> want to redo some of the behaviours in an updated version of DW (or the
> preview of DWMX).
>
> jord
>
> on 5/17/02 11:33 PM, (peter) from digitaltreats.com at
> webmaster@digitaltreats.com wrote:
>
> > i've got a website i've designed over and over through at least 4 years
now.
> > I invite you to check it out.. and tell me.. What can i do to make the
site
> > more compatable with netscape.. it gets killed in netscape. It was
> > originally designed to handle netscape 3 and 4.. but now a quick glance
> > there up to 6 or something.. and alot of things break now under the new
> > netscape.
> >
> > Comments are welcome.
> > the website is http:////www.digitaltreats.com
> > thanks
> > peter
>
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